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EROTIC
FICTION, SAMPLE 1The
Awakening of Emily
Chapter
One of Four
by
Alex Firestone
My
father objected when I decided to keep my Summer job
during the fall semester, but I knew my parents couldn't
afford my books, tuition and lodging this year. The
job would at least give me a little spending money.
I was one of those quasi-nerdy good girls, studying
to get a degree in business administration. But I felt
like something was seriously missing in my life. I had
become distant from my friends. I couln't keep a boyfriend.
I just let myself be led by impulse. I sold the car
mom and dad gave me and got myself an apartment just
half a mile away from the mall, where I worked as a
sales rep for a lingerie store.
I'm
not sure why I was so compelled to work there. The lacy,
sexy garments, I think, are what appealed to me more
than the job itself. I wasn't very focused on my job.
Being a chronic people watcher, I found myself tailing
the customers all the time, wondering what appealed
to them, what they're likely to try on, what they'd
do with it later. Maybe being a virgin at 19 was my
problem.
About
my fourth week in the store, while hanging some clothing
on the rack, something struck me as unusual, far to
my right, barely in my field of view. I turned to see
a remarkably beautiful woman in her mid twenties. She
was holding some almost nonexistent panties against
her. As she stood there looking down at herself, I marvelled
at how incredibly goddesslike she appeared to be--her
long shiny hair, her delicate hands, her slender, firm
figure. Her posture was statuesque and her movements
flowed. I thought I'd approach her to help her with
her selections, but I realized how intimidated I was
to speak to her.
Just
then she looked up at me. Her face was every bit as
stunning as her form. Her large eyes stared right into
mine. Her tongue appeared briefly, moistening her full
lips before she spoke. "Miss, could you assist me, please?"
I
wordlessly approached, still feeling unusually shy.
I stood beside her, noticing that she was actually only
about 5'3". But she was my height, four inches higher,
in her expensive-looking heels.
"I
know I want to buy this g-string, but I'm not sure about
this skirt. I usually wear a 2 but I think the 2 would
be a little roomy on me." She was holding the skirt
against her the way she had the g-string, earlier. Her
lengthy, brown hair cascaded over her other shoulder.
From my new vantage point, I could see her long, elegant
neck, collar, and clear down the deep-cut V of her silky
blouse. We girls are often on our guard about showing
our breasts to strange men, but usually don't give it
too much thought around the ladies. I've never known
myself to try to check out a girl's breasts like this,
but there I was, sneaking a peek. A sheer gold bra loosely
covered her C-cup breasts. I could see her tiny, rose-colored
nipple. "Hello?"
I
hadn't realized she had looked back at me. My eyes met
hers. She had this 'would you like fries with that?'
kind of expression on her face.
"Oh,
I'm so embarrassed!" I gasped, blushing, smiling, covering
my face. "I don't know why--I'm just a wreck right now."
"That's
OK. I get stares like that all the time, just usually
from drunken business men," she said, touching my arm.
Goosebumps appeared.
"Huh?"
I said like an idiot. What the hell was happening to
me? I've never responded like this to anyone, especially
a woman! I'm a 4.0 student, a girls' track 400 meter
record holder at my old high school. I'm turning to
jelly in front of this perfect stranger!
"I'm
an exotic dancer," her lips said. I was staring at them.
"I'm used to people looking at me like that. So, what
do you think, a size 1 or a size 2?" I had to snap out
of it. I was only seeing her piece-by-piece, not as
a whole. Why couldn't I collect myself?
I
took the skirt from her and looked at it, then looked
at her hips. "Let's see," I said, my voice weak. As
I stared at her pelvis, I couldn't keep myself from
imagining it naked, up on a stage in front of strangers.
She
took the skirt out of my hands and held it against my
pelvis. "Looks like it will fit you," she said.
Her
hands firmly held my hips. Her thumbs pinned the skirt
against the hollow of my hips. I felt quivering feelings
where her thumbs were pressing. My arms were curled
against my chest and I realized once again I was standing
aloof like an imbicile.
"Emily,"
the goddess said my name, squeezing my hips more firmly
as she addressed me. She had read my name tag.
"Yes,
ma'am?" I said, realizing my eyes were starting to water.
I glanced at her face, relieved to see an amused smile
on her face.
"You're
so cute. What is the matter with you?" the goddess laughed.
"I
don't know," I mumbled. "But thank you for putting up
with me. I'm really not myself right now."
She
moved a little closer to me, still holding the skirt
to my hips. "Take me to the fitting rooms." The scent
of flowers ascended from her chest.
"Ok,"
I said, and turned away from her, leading her to the
back of the store. I took a deep breath as I walked,
trying to reclaim my sensibilities. But as I walked
I found I was focused on listening to her walking behind
me.
The
fitting rooms consisted of three large walk-in rooms
with full-sized doors, allowing total privacy. Each
had two large mirrors inside, a chair, a padded bench
and a small vanity. I opened the door to #3 for her,
but she pushed me inside and tossed me the skirt. "I'll
be back in one minute," she declared with authority,
"I want to see you wearing that skirt."
As
the goddess began to close me into the fitting room,
called out, "I can't--store policy!"
She
shut it. "If I like it on you," she said through the
door, "I'll buy it." I felt a little frantic, so out
of control. Of course I could simply walk back out of
the fitting room, but deep inside I wanted to do as
she said.
I
quickly kicked off my shoes, unfastened my slacks and
practically jumped out of them. I looked at my thighs
in the mirror and questioned whether my panties suited
the skirt. I yanked my panties off and cast them onto
the chair. The skirt was short, giving me about 3 inches
of play below the crotch. It was a very sexy, sheer
skirt. I turned, looking at myself in the mirrors at
different angles. I really looked great in it! Of course
the blouse I was wearing didn't work at all with it.
I
timidly stepped out of #3 like a deer, looking around
for danger. Goddess reappeared and sized me up.
"Oh,
yes," she smiled. "That's very nice. It fits you perfectly."
She held my blouse above the skirt and rotated me to
the left and right, checking out the skirt--or me, really.
This is a skirt you just don't wear unless you're really
in shape.
"You
want to buy it?" I asked.
"Umm,"
she mused, "I think I'd like to try it on myself."
"Ok,"
I replied, and headed back into fitting room #3.
As
I turned to close the door, I collided with her. She
had walked in behind me! She pushed the door closed
and locked it. "Take it off and give it to me," she
demanded, softly, but firmly.
I
was trembling and she was perfectly calm. As I eased
the zipper down the side of the skirt, she began removing
the silk wrap that covered her thighs. I had the little
white skirt half way off my hips when her wrap dropped
to the floor. She was completely naked from the navel
down, except for her black pumps.
She
took a single step toward me. I stepped back into the
bench, which buckled my leg, causing me to sit. Her
hips and thighs were now at eye level. Her pubic area
was absolutely hairless and smooth, and her pink clitoris
extended beyond her labia, distinct, strangely magnificent.
I
pushed the skirt past my knees and over my feet and
offered it to her, but she just tossed it on the chair
behind her and continued toward me. My heart started
pounding and I realized I was gasping for breath. I
was afraid, but determined to let her do whatever she
was going to do. I felt a warm surging feeling in my
breasts and a strong agitation in my privates.
"Show
me how you feel about me, Emily," goddess said. She
gracefully lifted her right leg and placed her heel
by my left hip. Her right hand cupped the back of my
head and pulled my face directly against her mound.
My lips and nose mashed into the soft, smooth, hairless
flesh. I attempted to kiss her, but her jutting clitoris
was between my lips. I stretched my lips wider over
her vulva and she pressed against me even firmer. All
I could do was extend my tongue and suck.
I
had no idea what I was doing. I knew it was sex, but
I could never have imagined it this way. There was unfamiliar
flesh against my face, this prominent, suckable clit
on my tongue. I really did want her. I sucked and licked
her fervently, unloading the tension I'd been collecting
since I first saw her.
Her
hand closed into a fist, full of my hair. Her sexy hips
gyrated in response to my efforts. I realized my hands
were clenching her bare buttocks, which I could feel
tensing and releasing as she moved.
Suddenly
she pulled my head back and knelt between my legs. Her
soft, warm lips draped over mine and she kissed me deeply,
with ever-growing force until she was actually sucking
my tongue. She pushed me so I was leaning against the
wall. Her face lowered between my open thighs. I felt
her satiny hair cascade over my hips. She was not subtle.
Her lips plunged through my blonde pubic hair and labia
and struck ground zero. I couldn't tell exactly what
she was doing to my overexcited clit, but I sat up with
a shock, then dropped back against the wall again.
I
held her head against me and marvelled at what this
gorgeous creature was doing to me. Her slick tongue
buffeted my clit causing sensations I had never achieved
with my own hand. Relentless, she drove my excitement
higher until my whole body felt like an overfilled water
baloon. With a shriek I heaved forward, clasping her
head between my thighs and writhed as orgasmic energy
pounded me from within. Goddess clasped her hand over
my mouth as I whimpered and squealed through her fingers.
When
my storm subsided, goddess softly kissed my lips and
helped me to my feet. "Emily, would you like to learn
how to do that to me?" She asked.
"Oh,
yes!" I gasped.
"Then
when you get off work, go downtown to the Emerald Club
and tell them you're with Nadia." She said as she wrapped
her thighs in her silk as they were before.
"Ok."
"And
wear that skirt."
Nadia
stepped out of the room and left me alone. I noticed
three $20 bills lying on top of the skirt, which is
about $10 more than it cost.
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